My first haiku

When you are dying,

The little things break your heart.

I have lost the hours - - -

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Bryan Adam Tomimbang's picture

Wonderful haiku for your first, honestly. :)

allets's picture

That's Me!

Compact and full of meaning for me. The little crap drives me to drink which in and of itself is not a bad thing, but the extra ale widens the waist pushing me closer to the edge of the grave and more hours lost - nice Haiku ~~A~~