The sun- An short poem with lots of "!"s


Oh, the sun, the sun

Arises in the distance!

Yawning o'er the hills and mountain tops!

The sun, the sky, in all it's glory!

We hope it's revival ne'er stops!

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Waiting for the sun to come, lol.

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Sandeep  N S's picture

Never too,When it rise in you!

Ur a painter of words.Thats how poems should be.Some People have lost that touch.May be u can kindle it again.Hey,u had.