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Depression No matter what you say, it's true-You never wanted me.
I fake it, like I don't hear what you say that's hidden beneath the smiles- I hear it
And don't tell me you don't-I know you do
You break me, shake me, you try to take me over..
This madness'll never stop.
I once thought You were evil..
But now its me.
Me.
If the only way to escape this evil is death, dying, dying..
Dying.
My last breath, a wisp of smoke
Vanishes into the air
The choice is gone...
You're everywhere.
hey... this is an awesome poem and everyone feels unwanted and being a reject has happened to so many as welll thats y so many "rejects" can write such great poems...look on the bright side u can atleast get it out while others cant even do that...u write very well and keep it up...and yes i will be like everyone else and say that i can also relate to this poem cause it kind of feels like reading my life on paper...keep up the awesome poems...
I like this one. I feel like that a lot so I can relate. Maybe that's why I like it who knows? I don't rhyme all the time either. You commented on how one of my other poems was violent.. I have a more violent one. It's just not posted. Maybe now I'll post it. I like you're stuff anf thanks.