White Roses

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Just my poems

Pure white roses

Who are you?

Curiosity on my mind

Tell me your secret ambitions

Your reverie of passion

Spill your dreams of orange and violet

Watercolor stained perfection

Are you envious of the sun and moon?

Burning bright with brilliance

Seemingly content

You stay white

Fearful of taking chances

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deepblue's picture

great job

I've read through a few of what you've posted on the site and you have a lot of potential with your writing... Your imagery is strong and your vocabulary is excellent for somebody your age, keep writing! Best wishes

a.griffiths57's picture

    Beautiful words and a

 

 

Beautiful words and a beautiful picture portrayed also a beautiful poem. You must have a beautiful outlook.


 

 

http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57

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Thank you, very much. I do

Thank you, very much. I do try to have what you would call a beautiful outlook. When I start to think of things negatively, I try to remember how much you need darkness to make light brighter. Maybe thats even why we do have negative thoughts sometimes? Who knows... :)


-Destinee

Beatnik1979's picture

excellent

Very thought provoking, and well written. I really enjoy reading poetry that asks something. Not necessarily myself, but the muse. 

Destinee1398's picture

Thank you. I did alot of

Thank you. I did alot of wondering that day about many things.


-Destinee

Stardust's picture

beautiful lines, a fine read

beautiful lines, a fine read :)

best wishes, keep writin

Destinee1398's picture

Thank you:) I appreciate that

Thank you:) I appreciate that and I will :)


-Destinee