No One Knows!

No one understands the way i feel,
I cry in the dark , when i think of you,
So everytime you cross my mind,
I take the blade and cut my side,
To relieve all the pain inside,
So next time you see me,
Do'nt be surprised ,
If i'm in my room,
ALready in my Doom!

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darkpool's picture

I feel 4 u, but cutting is so

I feel 4 u, but cutting is so stupid. Y? There must be another way...

Seraphim's picture

I can certainly relate to

I can certainly relate to this; that's already the mark of a good poem. Let it flow... don't be constricted by rhyme and meter if you don't want to be. It's awesome that you could write this for your friend. Enchanting.....
Your Friend,
Seraphim


Post Tenebras Spero Lucem

Desiree's picture

HEY TO THE PEOPLE WHO READ

HEY TO THE PEOPLE WHO READ THIS POEM THIS POEM WAS BASED ON ONE OF MY BEST FRIENDS. AND I WROTE ABOUT HOW SHE FELT IN HER HARD STRUGGLES.!

dexterium's picture

good write :)

good write :)

MissSaigon's picture

Amazing!

This is really haunting, yet amazing at the same time! I can relate to this...