Coming of Age

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2016

Sometimes when days turn to weeks, to months, to years

life's thrill of discovery

and sense of wonderment fade

 

In no uncertain terms, this is undoubtedly expected - nearly welcomed by many.

 

Wisdom and experience denotes the absence of the rat race

associated with vivid naivety

resulting in healthy, tailored realizations

and sensible limitations abound

 

But if a sizable amount of life lessons

remain unburnt in raw mental wood

or if redeemable quests' rewards

remain wholly misunderstood

 

the cranial dulling

of brightest colors internal

runs a risk of warning labels erased

if mental sun emerges nocturnal

 

Sudden fear when your warped reality 

not in lockstep with a loved one's noble sanity

 

Terror surfaces, leading to hiding

from revered eyes in plain sight

powerful, yet equally blinding

alleviated in validated light

 

Chaos boundless

overruns

open opportunities shunned

when a pure heart within obstructive muck

of bad outlooks and worse luck

in acceptance

opens up!

 

The ability to thrive, much easier

accepting loose freedom in this ether

as a beacon rather than pylon

generates rocket fuel to surge upon

 

a power to bond and destabilize notions wrong

fulfilling a promise to generations

before and offspring everlong

 

taking your place on rightful perch

discarding the worries of pounds to envision your worth

satisfaction reigns with courage to burn

when you offer wheels grease to turn

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

decent-sized overhaul of this one 7.16.16, pretty pleased now

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Sassylass's picture

Wise

words!

from experience,no doubt!

wonderful verbiage and convincing!

Koko


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

allets's picture

First Two Lines

Open up such potential that is well explored in tone. Beacons and pylons ~ was like stumbling into a symbolist's adventure. I like the sense of time as aging. ~A~

 


 

 

deepblue's picture

thanks as always, it needs

thanks as always, it needs work but I'm pleased with it for now

Sassylass's picture

A perfectionist

okay I'll look back later:)


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

allets's picture

A Pleasing Write

Stopped by and had chance to re-read this gem. Exceptionally revised, miraculously conceived, beautifully executed. A keeper! Hugz and more hugz ~A~

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"...life lessons remain unburnt in raw mental wood..." gave me pause. Nice.

 

 


 

 

deepblue's picture

definitely went back to this

definitely went back to this one a week or so ago and tooled around with it, thanks for giving it another look allets :)