Horseshit Repellent

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A genuine sorry is not a weakness

and most definitely not a concession

not to be trampled

not a manipulative offense

 

You attempt to dictate my honor

disagreeing to the core

 

the least you could do is offer me more

than the cantankerous counterpunching

and later bids to cajole

 

A good deed or two from you

doesn't adorn mental decor

and doesn't sanitize verbal grime on the floor

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The candor of this poem is

The candor of this poem is both poetic and exactly on point!


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Yea I probably did a little

Yea I probably did a little bit of a disservice to this one with the abrasive title because it's probably more eloquent than the title leads on, so thank you for bringing it back into the foreground for me to give it a read for the first time in a great while

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It Is The Title

that caught my eye. Hoping for an ultimate rant and found it here. This poem says so well what someone must be told! - enjoyed totally - yrpoempalstella