I feel the warmth begin to fade

The world becomes a darker shade

I no longer know this face

I feel my heart begin to race

The lack of blood makes me faint

The floor around begun to taint

With my blood a slow red wave

How long till my mind will cave

I draw a final gasp of air

And wonder if you even care

This is it, now I die

With my last breath I say goodbye.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I don't remember when I wrote this, but it was a favorite of mine back in my younger days.

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Essence Scott's picture

i have a poem in more or less relantance to yours called goodbye, old friend...maybe you should read it

Sydney Helmers's picture

I love this poem it is amazing your such a talented writer never stop writing because you could go to the moon and back with nothing but putting a pen to paper