Sittin on a log

Walking downtown to a thriffed store and im thinkin for a song to sing,
life i know is not no flow that money talking often brings,
Shadows in the darkness shit in paper bags,
half these folks dont know my name but life alone is not so bad.

Waiting at a stoplight in the distant veiw of time,
an evil monster reads the paper without some shoes to shine,
News is news he choosed to loose, but gained some satisfaction,
For everyone will meet there maker, life is just an action.

Flew around through Veiwage Town cuz the color never changed,
looked at town hall and all the walls were radiant and aged,
"who knows another way to get downtown?" i said.
A girl in white said take three rights its past the color red,
"but that was were i waited for the light to make a sound of grey"
she looked at me and was polite,
she flipped me off and went away.

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SSmoothie's picture

I loved it

Some really great pieces in your folio, though I don like a couple for my own reasons, keep up the great work, I'll be listening when I can! :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

DeadAvacados's picture

Thank you.

i like nonsense poems that keep you guessin wtfs goin on n i tryed to do that with this one..its always nice to have someone apreciate your art, so i uhh.. i apreciate your apreciation. lol... not really the best poet gramatically n i suck at spelling stuff. but i figure screw it whos to say what is good and what isnt??? s'long as it portrays emotion thats really all that matters...or something like that right? ive kinda had writers block so i havnt written anything for a few days...but in time eventually ill shit out another one.

SSmoothie's picture

Yes I agree with you in most part

If you read my bio you'll understand the slight difference of i have on that, as for sitting on a log, where I come from a log is some thing we send off by flushing the toilet ;) thought you might like that little tid bit! I found your work some what amusing to say the least and interesting, I like the style keep on stacking those logs like you said and I'm sure you'll come up with a great pile of it! Lo! *Wink, *wink, *nudge, *nudge ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."