Something scripted

I don’t have a plan for tonight
I won’t ruin the surprise
there is a timer counting down
reaching zero when you arrive
and it triggers the bomb in my

stomach
enough motivation to break the

silence
enough motivation to survive.

 

So this is how you save yourself
have nothing left to lose
just focus on the ice
hit rock bottom after breaking through...
Self esteem issues*
and a better left alone SOS signal*
the whole damn thing spells T R A P .
You can see it from a mile away.
Tried true and tested with that look on your face..
Thanks, but i can hold my own breath, you dont need the pillow case.
So after the explosion, through the smoke and rubble - you make your escape..
Pretty good for a first date.

 

things you WILL NOT get:

 

a second thought / a second glance
a second chance.

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Miss.Jenna's picture

wow!

that was great. im in awe.. keep up the great poetry. :D

Davin's picture

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you=awesome. thank you

allets's picture

A Second Thought

Things you will not get? Powerful write - dramatic portrait. A second chance? My heart hurts for girlfriend - well said/well scripted, poet. ~Lady A~


 

 

Davin's picture

: )

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