a note of thought in which i be

 In night i  feel the cold in the day i burn alive

Even since the change i still burn with hope and scream in pain with every thought that i won't survive

The blood i need to  attain my power i force away

The thought of love drives hunger away

If ever a time i find love and they are wounded my thirst will over take me

And the world will once again see the power of me

The Dark Prince reins with a black lace fist 

The power inside is only a twist 

A  twist away is all my power

Anger this Eternal 

Unleash the immortal

Curse your self with the  demon  inside

The key to my power its in mine own heart yet

Still the master key lies still unfound in the heart of   another

The hope full mother of my child 

Only to be found when onto my knees i fall

I'm a master with no thrall 

And a slave with no matter

A Ronan i be

May  chance a angel in me you see

Or a demon with noheart to bleed

In only  the hearts eye can you believe 

A prince a prince still has the power to be

Light or dark even if he is an eternal the rushes to die

A starved  eternal is still immortal

 

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    Your poem is full of

 

 

Your poem is full of suspense of a dark underworld nature or well tempered nature. Just which to be? Or two sides of the same character!! This poem is amazingly written it realy catches the readers attention.


 

 

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Thank you fit the complement

Thank you fit the complement I am going to be  often or maybe another site I'm not sure yet but I'm going to be more active some where

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 You are quite well at

 You are quite well at reading into this thus you see i am dark and light sown  together dark gives me the  power and light the responsibility I'm a creature of the underworld an  Eternal gets  strength from blood i abstain and   retain my heart which will give me power as well if i was to feed i would be full of power and darkness if i don't I'm weak and full of  light the combination of these make me me i have the choice to reach for power or make my own 

All beings are complicated it's how we designed with our own  strengths and weakness Eternal and humans alike our sacrifices make us our break us