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Crooked Smile
It's the flaw inside the gem
that draws the gaze in deeper.
The crooked smile that tempts the prince
to kiss the enchanted sleeper.
It's the flaw inside the gem
that draws the gaze in deeper.
The crooked smile that tempts the prince
to kiss the enchanted sleeper.
Like it a lot. But feels like
Like it a lot. But feels like it should be longer. The two lines about the flawed gem suggest that the poem is about more than just a crooked smile. Perhaps what catches our eyes about someone the first time? Well done.
I'm always lying, in fact, I'm lying to you right now.
The Crook-ed Concept
Nice exploration of expectation and actuality - well constructed. - Where are you? You are missed mightily - be well ~allets~