Where I'd like to be

Where I'd like to be

is floating on a brook

by softly shifting scenery

like pages in a book.


Where I'd like to be

is on a bend of blue

amid wind-woven greenery

mirror'd in river's hue.


Peaceful gentle calm

sigh of sweet serenity

sung softly as a psalm

at last, blissful tranquility.


I stand upon the shore

waiting for the rain

to feed the flow once more

soon I'll be there again.

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and_hera_met_zeus's picture

Me too! Me too!

Excellent description!! :D Makes me want to take the canoe out!

allets's picture

An Actual Place

It sounds so real. Greenery, rain about to come,fill the brook, and float you away. Nice images. Like the song: "Sailing" takes me to where I'm going. Just a dream and a wind will carry me...soon I will be free. - Lady A -





Kornelia's picture

Such a beautiful journey much

Such a beautiful journey

much enjoyed your poem