Stop Me ....Save Me

I'm staring down the barrel of life.

One pull of the trigger and i might not survive.

No one to stop me, no one to save me.

Maybe it's my time to die.



Hands trembling....Heart pounding.

Can i do it? Can i pull it?

Oh, Please someone stop me, someone save me.

I don't want to die, to leave my meaningless life.

To hurt the ones i love, to make them cry.

someone save me....



Too late! Why didn't you come?

I called your name a thousand times.

I feel my life slipping, pulse slowing, heart stopping.

I came into this forsaken world alone,

didn't think i would die alone.

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Alison Beighton's picture

i think this poem is realy good as it shows how some people are in life i think you should keep writing poems like this well done
alison x