Love at First Kiss

In her eyes,

I found my soul,

The heart she gave me,

Made me whole,

 

And when we met,

She took my breath

She made me wonder,

Have I met death?

 

For she was so pretty,

Her allure seemed serial,

Her heart magnanimous,

And her beauty ethereal,

 

I may not know everything,

But at least I know this:

When it came to passion,

All I needed was her kiss.

 
Author's Notes/Comments: 

I met a girl during the Christmas holiday in Washington, D.C., and she sparked some inspiration for me to write this poem. I had been trying to write a poem for almost a year with no luck, until now. I wrote it over several days, and I am rather satisfied with the result.

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LutherSeahand's picture

Touching.  I like this very

Touching.  I like this very much.

SSmoothie's picture

Cute doesn't begin to

Cute doesn't begin to describe it but it floats around in this poem somewhere between deep passion and heartfelt emotion ;) lovely can we see more? 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

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DanielC360's picture

Hahahaha thank you! The

Hahahaha thank you! The support I've received for my first poem has given me some inspiration... I have another poem, but so far the most I have completed is the idea/theme of the poem. I appreciate the kind words however!

allets's picture

Joyous Write

Way to go - so much work it paid off nicely. I have been writing poetry for over 40 years and this is a fine piece - heartfelt and happy. - allets -

 


 

 

DanielC360's picture

Thank you! It was my first

Thank you! It was my first actual poem, so hearing this will get me enthusiastic about continuing poetry in the future!