twilight hours

of all life's tragedies that have abounded me
only one was not foreseen
not for a moment did I ever perceive
she would forsake me to the north winds
leaving me feeling colder than december in its twilight hours

~ D Donner ~
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There are 5 e's

in "...ever perceive..." Nice! (I reviewed prosody: practice vs preaching). Which one is missing? iamb, trochee, dactyl, _____, p h y r r i c, spondee.

never mind. I no longer give a syllabic foot! : ) & ; ) allet.