Don't do it on your knees

Have you ever thought about your soul 
whether or not it can be saved?
take a look around you 
what do you see
Pain
suffering
misery
were paying for someone's sins
in the beginning I didn't ask for the things that happened to Me 
but I sold My soul to learn to fight
there's old men watching widows crying as the young men lay dying
when you see this world we live in
do you still believe ?
you look at Me distrustful as I look at you behind these hard eyes
I've seen your kind before 
I think it was people like you that crucified Christ
just because he didn't fit in 
you think I'm crazy 
maybe it's true 
but I'll be damned if I let you nail Me to a cross outside any city walls 
I may turn the other cheek once
but it'll never be twice
this world is full of queens and kings 
who will bind you in chains and steal your dreams
the final answer in life 
is were surely doomed to die
but don't do it on your knees

~ D Donner ~

 
 
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tallsquirrelgirl's picture

Really like this

"this world is full of queens and kings 
who will bind you in chains and steal your dreams"

Really like this! great write


*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james

Daniel-59's picture

Thanks !  Glad I didn't have

Thanks ! 

Glad I didn't have to Trashcan it 


Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

allets's picture

The Daniel-59 I Remember!

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You tell us! - We need to hear about having courage. One second at a time. Thanks! - kick my ass back to life? oooooookay.  ~(:S)-