with creaky bones of to many years gone by

with creaky bones of to many years gone by
you walk through the darkness searching for yet 
another chance to turn a wrong to right 
but forgiveness rejects you

some people can only mimic the love seen
but have never felt 
this kind of love will always leave you in a world 
of shadows an darkness with tear filled eyes 
as hurt as you are 
you can't blame them 
for their only doing what they've seen done before

so you sit in a room absent of light an softly cry into 
the night
wishing to anyones god you could of made them see 
how you really felt

~ D Donner ~

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Creaky bones my ass! Whats

Creaky bones my ass! Whats this old man shit? Despite tge annoying reference that was a brilliant write dear bro. Touched home deeply. Yeah even the creaky shit. Big hugss for this write! You are truly gifted and cursed the signs of a brilliant writer! Love ya! 


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Annabelle Lee

Of course you have read it by Poe? Have you read "The Bells" by Poe? Lines like "...the melancholy menace of their tones..." is what this poem reminds me of. and "...loved with a love that was more than love, I and my Annabelle Lee..." Time for me to read Samuel Taylor-Coleridge's "Rime of the Ancient Mariner" again. The pictures on Google are amazing! ~Stella~

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