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hatred
you look at me with hating eyes
flames of enmity burn
your harsh cold words
diminish my soul to nothingness
your mere presence
threatens my existence
everything you do
drags me further into the depths
i beg of you to stop
stop torturing me
stop depriving me of life
very passionate!
Why'd you stop? It doesn't sound or feel finished. There should be more. It feels like the ending was cut off with a pair of pinking shears.