Thrill Me

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Volume Three

 

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Thrill Me

 

What has become of this life?
A victim of hate and brutality.
The insanity of it all is they believe their right.
In that being slaves, somehow they are free.

Violence is all we've ever known,
played out on TV, death is all we have been shown.
Running on legal speed, praised for your greed.
Insanity at the helm. It's the age of decay as he guide's your realm.

Forgotten is the beauty in kindness, morality within it's greatness.
All children of knowledge, children of faith
we all posses the potential to be great.

 

“Do you want to change the world, or allow the world to change you?”


I will conquer the world with love,
Shower you with kindness, and affection.
Give you my full undivided attention
In a world drowning in lies,
at least have the courage to look me in the eyes.

 

“You had your chance,
down on my knees no where to go
escaped your seductive glance
just as you had the killing blow.”




Author's Notes/Comments: 

I've been suffering from writers block for some time now, and still am honestly as this piece can contest its not one of my best qualities of work :S sure hope I am able to write again soon.

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indigo_kid007's picture

I'm in the same boat...

When your writers block is gone come back to this please! I love this and with a little revision it will be perfect!


EricaMay

MatthewWayne's picture

Thank you, It means a lot

Thank you, It means a lot that people love my art so much. To answer your question, honestly I am not sure what I would revise to this, though you sparked a curiosity in me in what you'd revise in it if you had any ideas? you have my permission to continue/edit this piece and post it up on your wall I'd love to see what you would add/change in it :)


"I am my own sort of strange, a supernova of madness and brillance. Forced to share the same space and time. Sane enough to not be seen, yet not crazy enough to be heard." -- Matthew Wayne

indigo_kid007's picture

well, well, this should be

well, well, this should be fun!


EricaMay

SSmoothie's picture

Wow with works so good I wish

Wow with works so good I wish I had your kind of writers block often! I've said it before I'll say it again droplets of brilliance in every verse ;) cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

MatthewWayne's picture

Thank you, and well sometimes

Thank you, and well sometimes I am able to squeeze work out when I suffer from writters block but it always makes me feel like it turned out less than good.


"I am my own sort of strange, a supernova of madness and brillance. Forced to share the same space and time. Sane enough to not be seen, yet not crazy enough to be heard." -- Matthew Wayne

thisisme789's picture

Anyone who doesn't know you

Anyone who doesn't know you very well, ie. me, wouldn't have been able to know that you are having a writer's block =)


<3

MatthewWayne's picture

Thank you, you all are way

Thank you, you all are way too kind!


"I am my own sort of strange, a supernova of madness and brillance. Forced to share the same space and time. Sane enough to not be seen, yet not crazy enough to be heard." -- Matthew Wayne

thisisme789's picture

Lol. No prob!

Lol. No prob!


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Elfy's picture

I loved this. Really good. I

I loved this. Really good. I agree with what you said. Keep going hon!


-Elfy*

MatthewWayne's picture

as always love to read your

as always love to read your comments, again thank you for the kind words!


"I am my own sort of strange, a supernova of madness and brillance. Forced to share the same space and time. Sane enough to not be seen, yet not crazy enough to be heard." -- Matthew Wayne