The Symphony

 

Inescapable tunnel-vortex

surges us through further,

baffles and bewilders

the meaning to know

the striving reasons

of the speculative symohony.

 

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The three active verbs in

The three active verbs in this very short poem give it a strong forward motion, and a stature of meaning that is larger than the sum of its lines.  And that final term, "speculative symphony . . ." is one that resonates with so much of the Symbolist school/style of Poets.  I think you are truly, and realistically, one of them.


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I'm grateful you comment, and

I'm grateful you comment, and so thoroughly.


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