Whisper to Me

The whisper winds
upon the shades,
lay me there
neath their sounds.

The lovely shade by aged oak
lovely sound and sweeping wind
brush my face and leave my peace,
to end the day in even thought.

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I really enjoy the simplicity

I really enjoy the simplicity of this piece. Somehow reading it just made me feel a greater sense of calm. Good job and keep writing! :)

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I appreciate the Feedback. :)