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I love everyone but my health is fading fast

And i don't know how long i am going to last

So i'll say my hurried prayers and I'll try to go to sleep

Hoping that somehow someway my soul the lord will keep

Then when i wake in the heaven in which i don't believe

I'll look down at my family telling them not to grieve

That someday they'll be with me

And only then they'll see

Heaven is an imaginary place

One made up so people will stop their pace

So they'll stop trying to live for today

Thinking they'll live in a paradise someday

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I don't believe in the term heaven unless its used as heaven on earth. Because to me a heaven on earth is achieved not through dying but through tru love.

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©23 September 2003 - 2:08am — cutetreena_1064
7 October 2003 - 4:29am — self-righteous rebellion (not verified)
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Interesting philosophy. I wouldn't make up my mind on such a life-altering opinion such as this, though, if i were you. You're what, 15? You have quite a bit more of life to experience.

Live your life, but stop to think about it more before you decide to ruin it somehow.