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Empty World
Emptiness, empty mind,
empty sockets, no eyes,
empty mouth, empty voice,
muted by no choice,
Empty lungs, empty heart,
empty ribcage torn apart,
Empty hands, grasping nothing,
Empty air.
Empty child,
with empty hands,
empty house for an empty man,
empty house, encased by empty noise,
Emptiness for the empty family,
a child muted by an empty choice.
Is this poem of yours
Is this poem of yours speaking of conformity as emptiness; I personally find conformity stifling at times. Your poem is certainly a cry for fullfilment instead of the emptiness that can fill lives. I like your poem a lot a good read and well written.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
thank you for your
thank you for your compliments, i hadn't thought of it in that way but i can see how it has something to do with conformity. once again thank you :)
Imagine with eyes wide open,and the world itself will change. for better or for worse it is you who affects what goes on.
There is always a
There is always a choice...albeit, sometimes it is a choice of death or life, acceptance or defiance, strive for peace or strive for war, seek to win or seek to form resolution, change or stagnate. This is where parenting and guidance comes in.
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
:) thank you for the
:) thank you for the opinion
Imagine with eyes wide open,and the world itself will change. for better or for worse it is you who affects what goes on.