Dreams begin to end

We dream until we don't
We live until we stop
All these days are now
And now they're not
I live today, tonight, tomorrow
Maybe it'll save me from sorrow
A reality I chose to follow
leads a still life, lost in between
constant cracks throughout my path
Always craving something more
yet held by phantoms that spin me round
They made me nauseous where I'm bound
Unshackle me from there
I do not belong 'round here
Free thyself from these accursed lands
Brake the spell that tie the bands
The world is moving, shifting by
I'm standing without a reason why
nothing more may hold me
I'm really leaving now, goodbye

E.A.

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nightlight1220's picture

live in the moment, stop

live in the moment, stop dreaming, and learn the path that leads to attaining joy from within. We are all a torus...but not many of us know it.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Torus

 

 

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

Diamond_Wills_New_War's picture

Superb poem. It hit close to

Superb poem. It hit close to home for me "the reality I choose to follow leads a still life, lost in between constant cracks throughout my path always I crave for something more" favorite line I relate to it too well. Excellent write and hope to see more from you in the future.


Long days and pleasant nights

Diamond