Under the Stars

I sit under the stars and wounder

who is rain and who is thunder

waiting for the clouds above to part

for then my world will stop filling apart

and an end will come to a start

and a proud cycle will embark

on a neverending journy

with out ever finding a honey

tell me what is there to show

about the knowage I now know

is it a life, a future alone

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poetvg's picture

lovely poem

Athalia Lystra's picture

The rhyming in this one is quite nice... i generally enjoyed the idea of being 'under the stars' although i completely comprehended that this was about more than just that.

Becky Zeits's picture

become one of the stars then

Holli Davin's picture

i really like this poem it makes me think of my own life and sometimes how i lay out under the stars thinking where i am going in life. great job keep writting your peoms are awesome!