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365 challenge
Each I we me or it
Quickly into the void slip
Your back voices
Brazenly
Ussurping truly
Deftly feintly
No if my and or but
Saves this stinking cockup.
how come I've only found this now xD
Ha! How often our own words can trip us up. A fantastic little poem.
this is not the end, this is not the begining of the end, this is merely the end of the begining.
Thanks Grimfate for the
Thanks Grimfate for the lovely comment.
Upon reflection
So I love this style of word riddle, is it the voices in the back of our head that cause us to spew forth the words of our embarrassment? Or an encounter of the modern 'isms' that make us wish we had said nothing at all? I am a curious man, as the creator, what was your thought behind it?
this is not the end, this is not the begining of the end, this is merely the end of the begining.
I simply had the image of two
I simply had the image of two people shouting at each other and the words that started each sentence would fall on the floor. 'Cock-up' came from reading Beavis
More Than
Faux pas less that absolute disaster, more a screwup and chagrin and unredeemabity.
:D
sounds confusing
sounds confusing
ron parrish
yeah maybe too much- so
yeah maybe too much- so changed the first no to each to try and be more precise. Thank you for the comment sometimes you dont know if others will read what you read yourself in the work.
sorry i meant confusing
sorry i meant confusing relationship
i guess i need to expand my thoughts
ron parrish