Mixed Messages

365 challenge


Each I we me or it

Quickly into the void slip

Your back voices


Ussurping truly

Deftly feintly

No if my and or but

Saves this stinking cockup.

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allets's picture

More Than

Faux pas less that absolute disaster, more a screwup and chagrin and unredeemabity.




word_man's picture

sounds confusing

sounds confusing

ron parrish

Coffeepot's picture

yeah maybe too much- so

yeah maybe too much- so changed the first no to each to try and be more precise. Thank you for the comment sometimes you dont know if others will read what you read yourself in the work.

word_man's picture

sorry i meant confusing

sorry i meant confusing relationship

i guess i need to expand my thoughts

ron parrish