Coals and Diamonds

365 challenge




A soft day fostered an east wind,

Arrogantly charring,

Angrily barring,

The charming Amber Dew,

Til two cruel spades throbbed,

In a tunnelled duel of lusty mirages

Forlornly based on coals and diamonds.

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allets's picture

"...two cruel spades..."

I read this five times - it apples to exactly one half of everything. Miriculous writing - slc



Coffeepot's picture

Yes it does, we each can be a

Yes it does, we each can be a cruel spade. xP