The Closer, the better

365 challenge



How's an ear supposed to hear


A vocal softened?


Winds in the words


Harried and carried


Away further then lesser


Gentle promises


In a need appropriates


A breeze whispered


The closer, the better

Author's Notes/Comments: 

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Great Use of Closer/Better

Deftly constructed, breezy - slc