Drip Drip Drip. (365 Words Challenge)

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Emotions

 

If only it would do something

other than this rain...

 

Perhaps.....a fluttery burst

of lacy snowflakes

falling in

~~heavenly~~

spirals ,floating

dreamily in

slow motion

to a white diamond earth, 

or the pinging of hail 

upon a

red wood deck

surrounded by

oak and pines.

 

Or even if it were

a cauldron of fog

rising up from

the valley floor

like some eerie

witches brew

on Halloween.

 

Anything but this

pounding ,drumming

incessant thrumming

drip, drip drone...

a torrential downpour

from dark angry clouds

with a cold embrace

obscuring

my lovely

view of the sea

 

This dreary gray rain

Just keeps on

reminding me

far,too much

of you and I.





cold embrace ,  gray are the words

Author's Notes/Comments: 

for Ashes 365 Word Challenge

gray, cold embrace

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Tallulah's picture

It's

amazing how just the prompt of two or three words can develop into an idea.

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Words

Set writers on fire.

You would know that:)

 


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

ashes_twisted's picture

OooOOOoo

That ending!!

I was not expecting that one.

Very creative write CKK!

 

 


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

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thanks

Ash, bickering isn't my style,but it's common so I wrote this:)

i appreciate your time in reading and commenting!

cheers!


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

allets's picture

I Can See This Poem

Great visual write. Exceptional addition to 365 anthology. ~A~

 


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Allets

thanks much!


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words