Audacious Autumn

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Seasonal Poetry

Never was autumn more beautiful than now, 
when admiring lake shades of sepia blue, 
stained glass of multicolored leaves filtering light, 
in orange hues of peach, tea rose or electric tangerine. 

When admiring lake shades of sepia blue, 
the shrubs and bushes wearing rustling ruffles
in orange hues of peach, tea rose or electric tangerine, 
a caprice perfumed sprite is haunting the forest. 

The shrubs and bushes wearing rustling ruffles
petrichor of autumn aromas brought by the wind, 
a caprice perfumed sprite is haunting the forest, 
like aphrodisiac jasmine, sandal wood and  vanilla. 

Petrichor of autumn aromas brought by the wind, 
ah, autumn with all its richness has such a thrilling effect, 
like aphrodisiac jasmine sandal wood and vanilla, 
lake and forest are wearing mulberry shadows at dusk.

Ah, autumn with all its richness has such a thrilling effect, 
stained glass of multicolored leaves filtering light, 
lake and forest are wearing mulberry shadows at dusk, 
never was autumn more beautiful than now.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Non- rhymed Pantoum

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Starward's picture

I have enjoyed autumn all of

I have enjoyed autumn all of my life, although I cannot fully explain it.  But I also love autumn poems, and this is one of the finest I have read in a long time.


Starward

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I'm so appreciative of your time to read and leave me

such a lovely comment. Yay! :)

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allets's picture

Ah Autumn

"mulberry shadows" could be a song. Nice tribute to autumn's colours. 


 

 

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Hi

Allets  thank you for your time to read it and commenting. 

Loved to see you!


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

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Hi

Allets  thank you for your time to read it and commenting. 

Loved to see you!


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

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Carol_James's picture

What a nice poem! It so easy

What a nice poem! It so easy creates all these charming autumn pictures in my imaginations.

 

Thank you for sharing such writings!


Carol James,

EssayLab&am

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Read and kind comment!

I appreciate your time to read it 


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