hidden motive*

Folder: 
Shadow Variations.

(not friends)

doing the inspirational release

of emotions

through poetry,

i come before,

(me)

i see the vagrant, abstract

obssessions,

of a too much time on my hands

pointed perspective,

but more at this,

"In depth form of Expression"

giver, who gives of his self

like he's selfless...

even though,

(he isn't)

can i...

manipulate my way, into

your existance,

to try, and pry

because,

you might, come apart in my hands

but your stronger than i,

(may presume)

so i'll say,

something, to make you feel

guilty,

and perhaps, you'll fall

into,

head first,

my trap, i've set for

things like you,

i'm psychic,

vampiric,

not so angelic,

are hands and knees,

a good position to plead,

from?

to make you perceive,

i really care,

but rarely, so true

the anxious await, of your blind defenses

to stray, from your senses,

i'll be there, to surprise you,

with nothing,

and everything,

to assist in unwinding...

the things that we do,

i want, what i want~

and,

if you don't give it, i might as well take it

(from you)

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Athalia Lystra's picture

What can i say.... i truly enjoyed this!

Josh Glasgow's picture

I'm surprised nobody's critiqued this yet. I'm sure I've seen it appear on the random a million times, but this is the first time I read it. And.. it's wonderful. Great job. Let me grab some great quotes:

but more at this,
"In depth form of Expression"
giver, who gives of his self
like he's selfless...
even though,
(he isn't)

but your stronger than i,
(may presume)
so i'll say,
something, to make you feel
guilty,
and perhaps, you'll fall
into,
head first,
my trap, i've set for
things like you,

i'll be there, to surprise you,
with nothing,
and everything,

Fantastic writing. I am impressed.