9 TO 5

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        9 TO 5
        9 to 5
  I don't feel alive.
  9 to 5.
  I feel all alone.
  I can't wait to go home.
  I hate true, being away from you.
  Hate how little is my pay.
   Not great.
  Hard see, for me true to be away from you. Day after day.
  Holidays, you and I can play.
  Vaca too, true.
  I wish weekends would never end. 
 
  Together and alone in our home.
  Dinners are winners.
  We look at a book.
 We see, watch TV; you and me.
  We sit in our chairs; we really care.
  
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Nice flow, with well-timed alterations

Nice flow, with, what to me, are well-timed alterations. Your expressed emotions here are very relatable. I think many have felt this way at some point in their life (this person included), and quite a few - I imagine - at this very hour. 

 

There's both a shame and a beauty to it, isn't there? The beauty of having such strong emotions for connection, for sure.