The Noose and the Necktie

She lifts her head
with a heavy sigh
She slips the knot
like my dad slips his tie

It's becoming more and more
obvious
That people on this planet are
nervous
We've all had enough self destruction

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Might add more later. Meh.

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SSmoothie's picture

Thats the spirit!

ThE subtle hint were all programmed for pessimism and drama is very intelligent and poignant it's like the poem I have called enough rope... Similar ideas only yours gets to the heart of it rather deftly! Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Callis.at.the.Palace's picture

It does bare resemblance to

It does bare resemblance to yours! Yours is way longer though. A good read though!!!


"Where do you go when nowhere feels like home?"-FBMF

lupus's picture

Absolutely love this.

Absolutely love this.

Callis.at.the.Palace's picture

Hey thanks!

Hey thanks!


"Where do you go when nowhere feels like home?"-FBMF