Thanks for the critique! I love mythology - In Greek mythology, Lethe was one of the five rivers of the underworld of Hades. Also known as the River of Unmindfulness, those who drank from its waters experienced complete forgetfulness/oblivion. It has an intimate meaning to me, as I have battled drug addiction for most of my adult life.
Are we thereafter frozen in time?
Dark and deep as an ocean bottom calling. The greatest depths drink the river.
A miniature whirlwind of
A miniature whirlwind of shivers, mystery, anguish and blazing imagination. Brilliant!!!
Thank you
Thanks for the critique! I love mythology - In Greek mythology, Lethe was one of the five rivers of the underworld of Hades. Also known as the River of Unmindfulness, those who drank from its waters experienced complete forgetfulness/oblivion. It has an intimate meaning to me, as I have battled drug addiction for most of my adult life.