Infectuous devils dance along the walls

Their shape shifts when the mistress's lips split

Erotic and neurotic

You can feel the passion digesting in her rhythmic nature

You can see her pounding heart through her bare chest

Thumping as her skin vibrates

Eyes glazed over lifeless, souless

The shaman's trance


Currents dominate the putrid air

Blisters peel as tears fall

I've cursed too many times

Now my blessings fall to ash

Haunted by ghosts and visions

My depression is the only thing real


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lizardking's picture

"my depression is my most faithful mistress"

"no wonder that i return the love." - soren kierkegaard

rose's picture

erotic and neurotic

i loved reading this, the last line got me

SSmoothie's picture

Dark and vivid. Just the way

Dark and vivid. Just the way I like it but can't write it. Hugs 

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

Carcass's picture

Thank you

I always appreciate your feedback! :) 

Sassylass's picture

Uh oh

shes a vial creature.

well penned!

i could feel it!

hugs, Koko

Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....



allets's picture

Let Us Now Discuss Neuroses

Well, enough about neuroses. Great and, as always, pleasingly dark. ~A~