Chasing the Rain

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Here it comes now

It falls down like hail

A picture perfect suicidal tale

 

Rain falls on the mirror

Smudge into a blur

Blood smeared on the pavement

There's nothing left of her

 

As blood fills the lungs

She speaks in tongues

Unnamed

Eyes roll back in her head

There's nothing left to begin again

Not before pleasure takes her away

 

Every breath I take

Is with a punctured lung

My feet are dragging

In the wrong direction

You say that you never cared

Yet you followed in my wake

You shed a thousand tears

For the demons you create

 

Release my mind from memories

Though I'd rather be apart from reality

Two time junkie with a death wish

Realized too late, death isn't bliss

 

The drums pound in my chest

A test to prove I am still alive

Never thought I would survive this nightmare

I can't say the same to the woman at my side

 

As blood fills the lungs

She speaks in tongues

Unnamed

Eyes roll back in her head

There's nothing left to begin again

Not before pleasure takes her away

 

Every breath I take

Is with a punctured lung

My feet are dragging

In the wrong direction

You say that you never cared

Yet you followed in my wake

You shed a thousand tears

For the demons you create

 

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SSmoothie's picture

Gruesome  reflection i read

Gruesome  reflection i read every  drop intently :) cheerss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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Thank you! It was one of my

Thank you! It was one of my favorite ones to write.  Glad you could get enthralled by my words!

i_Am_GraziE's picture

"You shed a thousand

"You shed a thousand tears

For the demons you create."

 

Wow it strikes me. Amazing! 


"Dont judge me by my past, i dont live there anymor

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Thank you! I'm glad you

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

tallsquirrelgirl's picture

wow...

really like this one! Keep writing :)


*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james

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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy it, and I doubt I will ever stop writing :)

Whispers_From_The_Mind's picture

wow this is really good

I liked it its very good. i actually could hear you singing it as i read. this one reminds me of a couple of my poems. keep up the great work. thanks for sharing 

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I actually have sung this

I actually have sung this one, haha. I'm glad you enjoyed it!