Wrong again

I sometimes get everything wrong
Tried to write a haiku but used
words instead of using sylablles

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saiom's picture

I'm of the school that one

I'm of the school
that one makes his own haiku rules
Why should you be in a straitjacket made
by dead people?

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i know, this is one days work

i know, this is one days work and i was just playing around with things as everyone should, wouldn't like to stick to one style.


I'm sorry i wasn't who you thought i was. F**k it, i'm sorry i wasn't who i thought i was.
...I bought the heartbreak hotel on my own with no investors, closed it down and opened the F**k you, get over it bed and breakfast

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i admire this one/// i have

i admire this one/// i have formed the belief that format really should not matter, only words. am i right?


 

Ascesa e rialzarsi fino a quando gli agnelli diventano leoni

Rise and Rise again until Lambs become lions

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Thats the way the wind blows

Thats the way the wind blows my friend. Don't worry i will be reciprocating the favour and posting on your poems after i finish this bloomin report :D


I'm sorry i wasn't who you thought i was. F**k it, i'm sorry i wasn't who i thought i was.
...I bought the heartbreak hotel on my own with no investors, closed it down and opened the F**k you, get over it bed and breakfast