The Body of My Work

The Body of My Work



Encrusted, encapsulated deep below

Unbroken turf

In embryonic solitude with rare

Interrupted seminal moments

Organic reality struggles

To touch sky



Ground long lain fallow

Not ignored more feared

Each mattock blow breaking sod

Left defensively unturned

Lest last vestige should leech

Irrecoverably lost in tawny run-off



A stanza, a verse aptly spoken

Pile driven aerator to break clay

Chipped marble slate gray shed

Brings life or revelation

That eviscerated corpse under copse

Exposed to a sun unseen for years



Inspiration storms across meadow

Washing, bathing, battering, caressing in turn

Awaiting the day there might strike that stroke

Drawn by a phrase rightly turned

That sparks across that eternal internal synapse

Life to discover

……. Self to recover

………….………Who I am shown to the words



© 4/20/00  Barton J. Breen

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Probably modeled some on Seamus Heaney.

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Ruth Lovejoy's picture

Hi Bart this piece is absolutely excellent,I love it! I've read a lot of pieces at PP over the past three years but this is the best I've read to date. Most would not understand a lot of words you use, but I do and I've had similar said about my work, that others don't understand a lot of the words or find it "heavey" to understand. One need only read carefully to understand,don't you agree?

poetvg's picture

this poem :*)
is out of sight .