Tide

Amidst the current

Tied

 

subtle dreams

glistening white snow

upon vast expanses of ice

broken by the light

 

listing and falling

wrenched in the abyss

 

caught unaware

despair

 

the only desire flying

trying

 

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Inside The Rhyming

"...glistening white snow

upon vast expanses of ice

broken by the light..."

A truly fine seeable image that can be shared on an emotional plane as observed. Exception line. Rare. ~allet~


 

 

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thank you for taking the time

thank you for taking the time to comment on my works, it is inspiring --- I probably would have given up without the comments... I always feel like my writing has no value