fire,ice,earth

My heart burns hot as the sun. It is a burning passion fueled by anger. It burns bright with hatred. You left and set my heart ablaze. It left me burning inside. When you turned everyone against me my heart became ice. I became as cold as the glaciers. Solid ice is what my heart has become. You left my world shattered. Everything around me crashed. I fell to my knees as the blood ran from my arms. No one noticed cause no one cared. Till she ran to my side and wrapped her arms around me. She threw away the knife, looked me in the eyes, and through tears begged me to stop. In that moment time stopped and it was just us. You left me to die and she saved me from myself.

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It is amazing that the fire

It is amazing that the fire of anger can turn to the ice of emotion just as strong. A very intense poem... it seems you are healing

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i try to do what i can for

i try to do what i can for marion i may only be one guy and i may only be 16 but i have god on my side and with his power i can change the world one thing at a time


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