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(Song) As You Bleed
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Music (A) Watch you bleed watching death begin to feed
Taking your own life without thinking as you start bleed
As you bleed
As you bleed
I see the blood all on my hands
I'm on my knees I cannot stand
I see your eyes stare into mine
The pain inside I can't define
I look at you, you look at me
Why is it you why ain't it me
You feel so cold I start to cry
I sit and watch you die
Please don't go I want you here with me
Loving you is all I have please don't give it all away
As you bleed
As you bleed
I see the blood all on my hands
I'm on my knees I cannot stand
I see your eyes stare into mine
The pain inside I can't define
I look at you, you look at me
Why is it you why ain't it me
You feel so cold I start to cry
I sit and watch you die
As you fade and fade away
As you fade and fade away
As you fade and fade away
As you fade and fade away
I see the blood all on my hands
I'm on my knees I cannot stand
I see your eyes stare into mine
The pain inside I can't define
I look at you, you look at me
Why is it you why ain't it me
You feel so cold I start to cry
I sit and watch you die
As you fade and fade away
As you fade and fade away
As you fade and fade away
As you fade and fade away
This has got to be your best song. I got goosebumbs as I read it. Your words flow in such a way that even with out music, the listner can hear how it goes. (or at least how they think it should) And the imagery is really the best. It is so sad and so wonderful. Congrats, this song rocks.
So far this is my favorite of your songs. I absolutly enjoyed it. In face the words were choosen so carefully that I really liked the message protrayed and even pictured the scene (or video if you liked) within my head.
OMG!!I almost cried!Thats the saddest poem!
I agree with Tania, I almost cried when i read this too love. Lol i read the critiques too. It's so sad. But, so beautiful at the same time. The tears fall straight into the ocean of a person's heart. It sort of gives that world is ending thing, but idk maybe its just me but after the darkness, doesn't the sun have to rise again sort of thing. Idk lol but i liked it.