Rock bottom (cutting)

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I feel like I'm falling,
But where does this black hole lead,
I don't see where the bottom is,
But I know it's coming,

Waiting,

I no longer can see the light,
Not knowing where the top may have gone,
The sides look the same,
Round and never changing,

Wanting,

Still falling,
My hearts sinking deep,
Deep into the pit,
Before I fell it was dying,

Hiding,

As the bright alarming color leaks from my skin,
Showing proof of my latest stress,
Giving signs of never ending,
Pain,
Sorrow,
Fear,
And the longing to just be real,

Crashing,

I'm still falling as I hear it,
A whimper,
A cry,
From who I'm the only one here,
I look but only prove what I feared,
As the burning shoots through me,
Never did I fear rock bottom,
Not until I hit it at least,
Not until,
I suffered my own doing.

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Seraphim's picture

A Very good write, you place

A Very good write, you place me right inside your head; I see what you see, know what you feel. You remind me of my best friend, perhaps you two would like to talk? Always here if you need a friend. ~Seraphim~


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Bloodbutterfly's picture

Thank you for the comment,

Thank you for the comment, and maybe so.... Thanks again.


You can only be as beautiful as you tell yourself you are, but you can't let beauty get to your head.

SoulShadow's picture

A good poem twisted but good

A good poem twisted but good