Self Portrait

Look in the mirror.

What do you see?

Empty blue eyes that seem to be searching.

Look again; look all around.

Small, full lips that are slightly turned down.

Look one more time, but look for her soul.

I see a lost girl with nowhere to go.

Her hair is long.

Her face is pale.

She seems so strong, but she is also so frail.

She is determined; she knows her own mind.

But what she is looking for, she may never find.

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nightlight1220's picture

Nice descriptive verse. I

Nice descriptive verse. I liked it. Could almost see the pout. ~peace~

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

FraXure's picture

Very strong and heartfelt.  I

Very strong and heartfelt.  I hope to read more! JP

 

 

 

allets's picture

I My Mirror

I see a millionairess with six homes and two private jets, then I remember I'm at the circus and everything is wavy - life as it is is changed upon the Blue Guitar. Love this one. So few, so far between writes though :D be well ~allets