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Words Can't Save You Now.
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4. Random. Your mistake is obvious
Yet you cannot see it
When you do,
You cannot find
The words to
Express yourself
Accurately.
You open your mouth
But all that escapes
Is a drizzle
Of trite words,
“I’m sorry.”
Can’t ease the pain
You have caused.
You shouldn’t bother
There’s no point
Don’t open
Your incompetent mouth
To let the stream
Of remorseful, but
Meaningless words
Trickle out.
i thought you put feelings into every syllable! you have such a good talent, so please don't waste it. i would love to read more of your poems and critique them all day but i have to get ready for iceskating. maybe later on i will read more of your poetry. you have an extraordinary gift!