The scar

The hurt is cold,

Pouring in,

consuming the last grain of hope,

drowning her in its depths,

she becomes new,

Those once tender thoughts,

now show fierce, 

a fire replaces that cooling touch.

she is a crow, a wraith,

a scar upon life's wrist,

a failed attempt, now a worthy enemy,

A hardened soul...

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allets's picture

Great metaphor

"...a scar upon life's wrist..."