Almost

Following the fireflies,

I'll find you,

fields are misty,

But distance is clear,

run, faster, to save a life,

the nights are cool and comforting,

when hands show red,

it's a freedom of sorts,

the dogs, closer,

but now nothing is undone,

a pitty though, 

they were so close....

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allets's picture

So Far

this 1 is my most favorite. Nice all summation ending line. 


 

 

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Thank u

Youre really very flattering, thank u