Heaven's Whisper

Hark ! the heavens do indeed whisper

Swish of breeze we must hear

Deafening thunder renting the sky

Do we hear or are we deaf ? Why ?

God's angels sing through bird's throat

The singing nightingale on branch afloat

Someday we haughty humans'll shed coat

Join the  realm of heaven please note

But as long as we can breathe and live

Let us cradle the gods gifts and try to forgive

Soon in a whiff the last breath shall escape

I'll feel the angel's kiss on my neck's nape Laughing


©bishu

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Inspired by roseblossoms 


http://www.postpoems.org/authors/roseblossoms/poem/989499

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Beavis's picture

;-)

"Swish of breeze we must hear"

great line & great truth!  everyone hears the thunder, but that "swish of breeze"...:-) well done, Sir!


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You are an accomplished poet on this site Sir Beavis

You are an accomplished poet on this site Sir Beavis.I am overwhelmed by your kind comment Sir.Thanks !!!!!!!!!


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a.griffiths57's picture

    A wonderful poem bishu

 

 

A wonderful poem bishu about all that is dear and that plunge into the unknown realm of death. How dramatic; I enjoyed your poem very much; it's so unfair we have to move from earth to hopefully a heavenly realm; as there is so  much beauty here don't you think?


 

 

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Respected Madam Anita Thank you for liking the post

Respected Madam Anita Thank you for liking the post.We have to bid goodbye to all the wonderful gifts bestowed upon us .Death is certain whenever that is .No point in wasting another wonderful day of life.What lies beyond death none know although thousands of hypotheses are there penned & preached by wise people ~Be well be happy~


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I love your imagery

I love your imagery especially that of the deafening thunder. :)

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Thanks my dear friend Mr Peter

Thanks my dear friend Mr Sceneric   Peter

May God help you to write better n better

I am looking forward to having a baby sitter

Who'll take care of me when I'm old and senile

Till then let me try to write something worthwhile ~Your friend across the ocean~


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Ah! My Friend you are indeed

Ah! My Friend you are indeed a wordsmith. This is I think the best of your exquisite poems. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes fromall at my humble abode. Bern.

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Yes ! A wordsmith hammering away till fingers rot :)

Yes ! A wordsmith hammering away till fingers rot :) If this is "the best" I should stop immediately shouldn't I ?? Thanks for your good wishes. I also wish you the same from my nestdwellers.~Your friend unseen Guffawing liver & spleen Laughing=BM~


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KingofWords's picture

Wonderful!

This is beautiful Mr. Bishu. :)

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Thank you for your kindness Mr Haque my friend

Thank you for your kindness Mr Haque my friend


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