Little Miss

  


Little Miss Toughest

Was truly  the closest

Sniffing the corn & hay

There came a big fighter

Sat down beside her

Frightened Miss Toughest away

 

©bishu

Author's Notes/Comments: 

A tiny weight - 1 oz.For weighing heavier things it is cast aside and a 10 lb weight is used.Just thought of a good ol NRhyme.May have figurative meaning though....... Cool

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Poetic_Eyes's picture

i like it

i like how it's short lines, but it's fun, interesting, and playful. poetry doesn't always have to dark or heavy hearted. poetry can be anything you make it and i love how you showed it's diversity. well done.

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Thank you Respected Madam poetic_eyes for reading & commenting

Thank you Respected Madam poetic_eyes for reading & commenting with your expensive time.


©bishu 

 

SSmoothie's picture

So cute a gangster crhyme!

So cute a gangster crhyme!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Thank you for reading my humble submission Respected SS

Thank you for sparing time for reading my humble submission Respected SS .


©bishu 

 

nightlight1220's picture

You make me laugh. maybe she

You make me laugh. maybe she needs to eat more curds and whey. After all these years, the while family may need a Dr Atkin's diet.

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

bishu's picture

Did you say Laughter Diet ???

Did you say Laughter Diet ??? Muffet Missus' Family Album is The Best Diet.Keeps all docs away.You made my day Respected nightlight1220 !!!!!!!!!!!


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