Razed

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Razed


Social & family obligations
Raze me with a bulldozer
I lose on precious time



#handraiaedforavacation

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A Facebook instahaiku

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you painted a perfect hauki

you painted a perfect hauki


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Mr WordMan Mr WordMan !!!

Before joining PP I never knew what a Haiku/hauki was. You guys have been my best teachers whom I'll never forget till my last breat. Best wishes from a sultry City


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Happy Father's Day this Sunday, Bish - allets -

 


 

 

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A school junior

A school junior on Facebook posted asking for her friends to raise hands those who wanted to get away from the cacophony of the maddening citiy for outings. On her comment line I wrote "Raised" and then "Razed" came to my mind & so also.... well the 3 liner says the rest. Feel sorry for yah since yah can't be a Pappa in this birth Laughing


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